Of the examples below, which of the following is an example of specific, descriptive feedback?
Very fine work on this. You’ve done an excellent job and exceeded expectations
This paper has earned the score of 78%. This qualifies you to move onto the next level and work in a new textbook
You have made some errors in the assignment. I recommend proofreading your work with a partner.
You have included a lot of valuable information about the development of ancient Egyptian culture, but you did not mention anything about the impact of religion on the cultural practices. You need to add a few paragraphs explaining the role of religion in ancient Egyptian culture.