What is most essential in discursive writing?

What is the problem with this introduction?

Do you know the secret of being healthy? Undoubtedly, it is following a healthy lifestyle. Some people believe that it is the parents' responsibility to ensure that people stay healthy, while others argue that it is the responsibility of individuals. In this article, we will look into both sides of the argument.

Who is the primary audience when you write an article responding to the following prompt:

Some people think that the world would be a better place if everyone became vegetarian.

Write an article for your school magazine, giving your views.

Who is the primary audience when you write an article responding to the following prompt:

There is a proposal to close the swimming pool in your town and build a supermarket there instead.

Write an article for the local newspaper, giving your views.

A good body paragraph should look like a hamburger, which includes a _________ ________, some supporting details and a closing/concluding sentence.

Using _________ __________ throughout your article is essential to show that your writing is effectively organised.

How to show your sense of audience when writing for a school magazine? (Choose all that apply.)

Which is the odd one?

Which is the odd one?

Which is the odd one?

Which is the odd one?

What is the problem with this body paragraph? (Choose all that apply.)

Learning music can be extremely beneficial to students. Firstly, it can help us relax. Moreover, music can make us more intelligent. It is also worth mentioning that we could always seek a career in music if our chosen career appears not right for us.

How has this body paragraph been improved from the previous one? (Choose all that apply.)

Learning music can be extremely beneficial to students. Firstly, it can help us relax by diverting our thoughts from the tremendous amount of school work and the pressure that we receive from examinations, such as knowledge checks. Moreover, music can make us more intelligent, because by learning new skills, we can improve our brain power and widen our horizon. It is also worth mentioning that music offers us a change in plans. In other words, if we feel that our chosen career is not right for us, we could always seek a career in music. Take Miranda, the alumni who gave us an inspiring speech in the assembly last week, as an example. Her story about how her music learning helped her find a career in the advertising industry encouraged everyone who attended, even those who are not currently enrolled in a music course.

What could be included in the 4th paragraph?

Some people think that studying online is better than learning in a traditional classroom.

Read the conclusion responding to the prompt above and choose the elements that it includes:

In conclusion, online learning is, without a shadow of a doubt, preferable for students who are self-motivated, but if you are the kind of student who relies on others, it is disadvantageous. Personally speaking, as such a student, I hope we will never again suffer from quarantine or lock down so that we can all study in our classrooms.

What's the suggested word count for Exercise 5 and 6 writing respectively(if you manage your time well during the exam)?