20 questions
The reporters waited outside, the girl told her story inside the school.
outside, when the girl
outside; the girl
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Olivia took a lot of time doing the research and writing the report.
wrote the report
to write the report
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Nabila would make a good president because she works effectively with others, has a reputation for integrity, and she has a reputation for independent thinking.
and independent thinking is something she has
and has a reputation for independent thinking.
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I won’t go to college tomorrow. If it rains.
I won’t go to college tomorrow, if it rains.
If it rains, I won’t go to college tomorrow.
No change
Although we were excited about the trip we finally decided not to go.
the trip, we
the trip. We
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Students are aware of the penalty of cheating they must be honest.
cheating, so they
cheating, they
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Jennifer works at the library, she is always reading the latest novels.
the library. She
the library so she
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I feel very lonely. Because I just moved into a new neighborhood.
lonely, because
lonely because
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Since the invention of the mobile phone, people don’t visit each other anymore.
phone, so people
phone. People
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I can’t solve this problem my teacher tried to help me.
problem, therefore, my teacher
problem; therefore, my teacher
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Jenny can’t drive therefore she has to take public transportation every day to college.
drive, therefore, she
drive. Therefore, she
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That is sitting on the chair.
I like the girl that is sitting on the chair
I like the girl. That is sitting on the chair
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Many young people like to skateboard and watching the techniques of other skateboarders.
to skateboard and to watch
to skateboard and watched
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The results of the study were inconclusive, therefore, more research needs to be done on the topic.
inconclusive, therefore;
inconclusive; therefore,
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John for the bus all morning in the rain last Tuesday.
John waited for the bus...
Waiting for the bus all morning in the rain last Tuesday.
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Because his car was in the shop; he decides to take a taxi to work.
the shop. He
the shop, he
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Shows no improvement in the writing style.
He shows no improvement...
Showing no improvement...
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If job hunters want to make a good impression at an interview they should be sure to arrive on time.
interview, they
interview; they
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Amy was looking up words in the dictionary. But was having trouble. She didn’t know how to spell them.
but she was having trouble
but was having trouble
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Her ideas are usually sound and of importance.
sound and important
it has importance
No change