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- 1. Multiple Choice
1 Which is the best way to combine sentences 7 and 8?
A He didn’t see any that he liked because he talked with his grandmother.
B He didn’t see any that he liked, even though he talked with his grandmother.
C He didn’t see any that he liked, so he talked with his grandmother.
D He didn’t see any that he liked when he talked with his grandmother.
- 2. Multiple Choice
2 Which transition is best to add to the beginning of sentence 15?
F However
G Therefore
H After all
J Soon
- 3. Multiple Choice
3 Darla needs to add a topic sentence for the fourth paragraph (sentences 16–19).
Which sentence should be added just before sentence 16 as the topic sentence for this paragraph?
A From there, Mo’s Bows became very popular.
B Eventually, Mo needed help with his business.
C Mo was excited about starting the company.
D Mo sold some bows to a few people.
- 4. Multiple Choice
4 Which change can Darla make to improve the clarity of sentence 31?
F Change them to young people
G Change what to things
H Change they to you
J No revision is needed in this sentence.
- 5. Multiple Choice
5 Xavier would like to replace sentence 2 with a sentence that will improve the focus of his paper. Which sentence should he use?
A LEGO bricks are a great toy because building with them teaches children important skills.
B Playing with LEGO bricks is a hobby families can really enjoy together.
C I was surprised that I had never heard of the LEGO KidsFest.
D Last week I had a great day with my family and learned about one of my favorite toys at LEGO KidsFest.
- 6. Multiple Choice
6 Xavier has included an extraneous sentence in the second paragraph (sentences 3–8). Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?
F Sentence 4
G Sentence 5
H Sentence 6
J Sentence 7
- 7. Multiple Choice
7 What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 26?
A Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model and add it to any state on the map.
B Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model to any state on the map they could add what they built.
C Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model, then they were able to add that LEGO model to any state on the map.
D Visitors were able to build a LEGO brick model, then visitors could add the LEGO brick model to any state on the map.
- 8. Multiple Choice
8 Xavier would like to add a sentence to bring his paper to a more effective conclusion. Which sentence should he add after sentence 37 to help achieve this goal?
F The best part of the day was seeing the LEGO models.
G Next Saturday, my family and I are going to the San Antonio River Walk.
H There are many fun things to do in Texas.
J Until then, I plan to keep practicing my new master builder skills.
- 9. Multiple Choice
9 What change should be made in sentence 3?
A Change Leaves to Leafes
B Change brush to brushes
C Insert a comma after windows
D Change through to threw
- 10. Multiple Choice
10 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 5?
F Change like to likes
G Change we to they
H Change created to creating
J No change needs to be made.
- 11. Multiple Choice
11 What change should be made in sentence 8?
A Change rain forests to rain forest’s
B Change thickly to thick
C Delete the comma after areas
D Insert a comma after shore
- 12. Multiple Choice
12 What change should be made in sentence 13?
F Change need to needs
G Change walks to walk
H Change use to using
J No change is needed.
- 13. Multiple Choice
13 What change should be made to sentence 18?
A Change their to there
B Insert a comma after hotel
C Change shaped to shape
D Change bird’s to birds
- 14. Multiple Choice
14 What is the correct way to write sentence 22?
F The Frio River Treetop is closer. To home, it is located near Leakey, Texas.
G The Frio River Treetop is closer to home. It is located near Leakey, Texas.
H The Frio River Treetop is closer to home as a result it is located, near Leakey, Texas.
J No change is needed.
- 15. Multiple Choice
15 What change, if any, should be made to sentence 26?
A Change makes to make
B Change greatest to great
C Insert a comma after spot
D No change needs to be made in this sentence.
- 16. Multiple Choice
16 What change is needed in sentence 28?
F Change prefer to prefers
G Change climb to climbing
H Change traditionul to traditional
J No change needs to be made.
- 17. Multiple Choice
17 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 29?
A Change provide to providing
B Change a to an
C Change enjoy to injoy
D No change is needed in this sentence.
- 18. Multiple Choice
18 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 4?
F Change find to found
G Change entertain to entertaining
H Change themselfs to themselves
J No change should be made in sentence 4.
- 19. Multiple Choice
19 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?
A Change are to were
B Delete the comma after mammals
C Change that to they
D No change should be made in sentence 6.
- 20. Multiple Choice
20 What is the correct way to write sentence 10?
F One kind of an air bubble is shaped like a circle and called a bubble ring. Happening to be the perfect sea toy.
G One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, and called a bubble ring. Then it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
H One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle, called a bubble ring it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
J One kind of air bubble is shaped like a circle. It is called a bubble ring, and it happens to be the perfect sea toy.
- 21. Multiple Choice
21 How should sentence 11 be changed?
A Change Scientists to scientists
B Insert a comma after filmed
C Change playing to play
D Change rings to ring
- 22. Multiple Choice
22 What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 17?
F Change catch to caught
G Insert a comma after ring
H Change braking to breaking
J No change should be made in sentence 17.
- 23. Multiple Choice
23 What change should be made in sentence 20?
A Change experts to Experts
B Change were thinking to think
C Change help to helps
D Change hunt to hunting
- 24. Multiple Choice
24 What change should be made in sentence 22?
F Change causes to cause
G Change surface to surfase
H Insert a comma after water
J Change scatter to seater
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