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J.T. would like to add the following sentence to the first paragraph (sentences 1–6).
Students from around the world are also part of musical marching groups.
Where is the most effective place to insert this sentence?
After sentence 1
After sentence 2
After sentence 4
After sentence 5
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 15?
A misstep by just one student and a flaw is created that is visible in the perfectly coordinated display.
A misstep by just one student creates a visible flaw in the perfectly coordinated display.
A misstep by just one student creates a flaw in the perfectly coordinated display, the flaw is visible.
A misstep by just one student creates a visible flaw that can be seen in the perfectly coordinated display.
J.T. has included an extraneous sentence in his paper. Which of these sentences should be deleted from this paper?
Sentence 9
Sentence 13
Sentence 18
Sentence 20
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