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Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
The new book was read by every student on the second shelf.
On the second shelf, the new book was read by every student.
The new book on the second shelf was read by every student.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
The cowboy was thrown by the bull with a leather vest.
The cowboy with the leather vest was thrown by the bull.
With a leather vest, the cowboy was thrown by a bull.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
With a flat tire, the turnpike had a car to be towed.
The car with a flat tire was towed off the turnpike.
The car was towed off the turnpike with a flat tire.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
Don't give the fish with small bones in it to the cat.
Don't give the fish to the cat with its small bones.
Don't give the fish to the cat with small bones in it.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
The train station was located by a river made of red brick.
Made of red brick, the river was beside the train station.
The train station made of red brick was located by a river.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
He found a pie in the refrigerator baked by his wife.
In the refrigerator, he found a pie baked by his wife.
His wife baked a pie found in the refrigerator.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
He saw a bird that he didn't recognize sitting on a wire.
He saw a bird sitting on a wire that he didn't recognize.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
I bought a table with collapsible legs from a clerk.
I bought a table from a clerk with collapsible legs.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
We watched the man on the roof jump to the ground.
We watched the man jump to the ground on the roof.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
Riding his bike down the road, Bill was attacked by a dog.
Riding his bike down the road, a dog attacked Bill.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
To do well in school, studying is necessary.
To do well in school, a person needs to study.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
Paddling furiously, we were able to reach land.
Paddling furiously, land was reached.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
While attending the concert, my stomach hurt.
While attending the concert, I had an upset stomach.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
This shows the product's charm, safety, & how strong it is.
This shows the product's charm, safety, & strength.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
The case is flexible, sturdy, and spacious.
The case is flexible, sturdy, and has a lot of space.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
We met many people who were kind, nice, and who helped us.
We met many people who were kind, nice, and helpful to us.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
Cathy occasionally does her homework.
Cathy occasionally does her homework at times.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
After descending to the river, we boarded a small raft.
After descending down to the river, we boarded a small raft.
Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?
Dad leaves at noon and went to the meeting.
Dad left at noon and went to the meeting.
BONUS: How should this sentence be rewritten this
sentence?
With each blast from the air in the burner growing hotter, the balloon was allowed to fly higher and higher.
With each blast from the burner, the air in the balloon grew hotter, allowing the balloon to fly higher and higher.
With each blast from the burner, the balloon’s air grew hotter, this allowed the balloon to fly higher and higher.
With each blast from the burner, the balloon grew hotter, allowing the balloon to fly higher and higher in the air.
BONUS: What is the most effective way to write this sentence?
Huge flames shot out of the burner inside the balloon, which was heating the air.
Huge flames shot out of the burner because the air inside the balloon was heated.
Huge flames shot out of the burner, the flames heated the air inside the balloon.
Huge flames shot out of the burner, heating the air inside the balloon.
BONUS: How should the sentence be revised?
For more than an hour, Jayden, his father, and their fellow passengers floated high and floated way above the trees and the town.
For more than an hour, Jayden, his father, and their the trees and the town, which was way up high.
For more than an hour, Jayden, his father, and their fellow passengers floated they were above high above the trees and the town.
For more than an hour, Jayden, his father, and their fellow passengers floated high above the trees and the town.
BONUS: What's the correct way to write the sentence?
The dog jumped up to greet them, sending bits of fur into the air.
The dog jumped up to greet them. Which sent bits of fur into the air.
The dog jumped up to greet them, this sent bits of fur into the air.
BONUS: What is the correct way to write the sentence?
Resting on a blanket was a medium-size dog. Who had curly white hair and floppy ears.
Resting on a blanket, a medium-size dog. She had curly white hair and floppy ears.
Resting on a blanket, a medium-size dog with curly white hair and floppy ears.
Resting on a blanket was a medium-size dog with curly white hair and floppy ears.
BONUS: What is the BEST way to write the sentence?
I believe that a day without technology is a day that will be helping make you a healthier and better person and friend.
I believe that a day without technology will help make you a healthier person and a better friend.
I believe that a day without technology, it will help make you a healthier person, and it will help make you a better friend.
I believe that a day without technology is good, it will help make you a healthier person,who will be a better friend
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