English

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  • 1. Multiple Choice
    3 minutes
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    What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 6?

    Eventhough

    In Contrast

    Furthermore

    However

  • 2. Multiple Choice
    3 minutes
    1 pt

    Kelly wants to add a more effective transition between the second paragraph (sentences 4–11) and the third paragraph (sentences 12–14). Which of the following sentences should be added before sentence 12 to help readers effectively transition from the second to the third paragraph?

    F Using the snooze button can have a negative impact on a person’s health.

    G Perhaps more serious, though, is how this sleepiness can affect a person’s mood.

    H Sleepiness also may occur if the body’s circadian rhythm, or internal body clock, is disrupted.

    J Interfering with the natural circadian rhythms is equally distracting.

  • 3. Multiple Choice
    3 minutes
    1 pt

    Kelly has not used the most appropriate word in sentence 17. Which word best replaces changes?

    varies

    shifts

    controls

    decreases

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